My C4K for March was a blog post by Zahra. This post was a short story from the point of view of character named Amy while camping. The character becomes scared upon waking in her tent while on a camping trip she planned with her father. As she woke up she saw fifty little spiders inside of the tent. She jumped with terror and woke up her mother. Amy’s mother ran out of the tent, jumped on her dad and left for home. I thought Zahra did a great job in her choice of words to describe the emotion of her story. This was great for capturing her audience as they read the short story. I encouraged her to continue writing and posting.
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